Feedback Unit 3/Website Activity 2

Hi Pam!

Thank you and your group for the information presented on the website page regarding adolescent psychosocial and emotional aspects.  Beautiful aesthetics of this page are clean and inviting for the reader.  Discussion of female development and well-being through complex social dynamics was well rounded and thorough.  I would love to hear more about the attitudes toward gender roles in society, as far as why there are limiting factors for female goals and career choices.

I feel the media used in this section is relevant and relatable to the topic.  Placement of media is well thought out.  Headings and subheadings are visible and well placed.  The last sentence in the first paragraph under social factors is a strong sentence, although uses a repeat descriptor.  There are no grammatical errors and the information is fluid with easy to grasp concepts for young audiences and for basic knowledge for healthcare providers. 

The video for The Adolescent Brain is a great fit, engaging and age-appropriate.  I recommend adding a lead-in caption and citation to attract readers explaining the video summary and why one should view the video.  Additionally, this would be helpful for the Restricted Sleep and Depression Infographic.  A beginning title and introductory paragraph may help this feel a bit more cohesive although the paragraphs flow very nicely.  Great work to you and your team! Thank you again for sharing!